Exercise #2

Weaknesses:                                                                                                                      

1.       “The author enhances the stress by throwing the reader straight into the action.” (Error #4)

2.       He "kept his butt cocked to one side, his feet up on the shut rails so that the bull couldn't grind his leg, brad him up, so that if it  thrashed he could get over the to in hurry." (Error #2)

3.       The bull "loose-skinned brindle Brahma-cross identified in the program as Little Kisses." (Error #2)

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